Since the front splash page (www.elementalgame.com) is where you make your first impression for people who are interested in the game, I'd like to make a few humble suggestions for a few of those sentences.

"The Sorceress Procipinee has claimed your northern cities as being part of her domain"  --> "The Sorceress Procipinee has claimed your northern cities as part of her domain"

"Design your sovereign in terms of talents, class, even what he (or she) looks like." --> "Customize any aspect of your sovereign, from appearance and talents down to details of social class and personal storyline."

"Found new cities and build them up by researching new technologies, recruiting specialists or trading knowledge with other Kingdoms." --> "Found your kingdom and build its might by research, trade, warfare, diplomacy and restoring the magical resources of the broken land."  (Would suggest this be moved to the final sentence of the paragraph, after the bit about sending the champions.