Just drop shield imho, its not that great as people say it is, sure its awesome to be invincible, but its only for a couple fo second and its cooldown is immense(compared to other general support skills).
Hmmm, shield "isn't that great" ummm, level 3 shield guarentees living no matter what as long as you have a teleport that costs 250...
Maybe it is just me, but i think that is pretty good, whatever oak build i do, ALWAYS has shield 3, if i am doing a minion build, one level of penitence, one DJ, one soul power, if i am doing assassin, max penitence and DJ, every build also maxes SoF...
I like the build, but as stated above, you shouldn't get soul power II or III it just isn't worth it, instead, i suggest you get up to shield III, shield IV is a waste of mana for only 600 health, and 6 seconds gets you out of anything, so it is good as is...
Otherwise, great job! I will try it with a few minor tweaks myself!
DaBRUM