Edge585

Edge585

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[quote]Same here, and my computer has been acting up so I doubt I will really be able to play Demigod But if one of the requirements for a contest was that they had to be abilities with number stats, well I would be out of it automatically.[/quote] Sorry to hear about you computer. [e digicons]8O[/e] I don’t think the contest would require number stats a

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[quote]Hey, that contest idea would be a great publicity stunt, and it would probably further solidify their place in the hearts of the people who play Demigod. And a contest might generate more original ideas, but there would also be tons of junk like 'generic Egyptian God.' The only reason I write any of the ones I do is because I need/want to get some writing practice in, besides comenting on Heathcliff from Wuthering Heights *shudders at the thought of that abomination* And yea

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[quote]o lol, sounds great! i thought it was taken off another Warcraft thing, but this seems great![/quote] Hi, glad you like it. Just curious what you thought it was going to be, is there something in Warcraft regarding the name Silvermoon?

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[quote]Good read, not your best, Jagan and King of Blades are my favorites of yours. Ability wise you know I should not comment on it, but Pathogens seems it would be rather overpowered early game, but maybe my idea of the effectiveness of health regeneration is wrong.[/quote] [quote]pretty good [/quote] Ah, and here I thought no one really liked the King of Blades/Jaga

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[quote]like the idea it would be cool to have a DG like this and the background was a good read.[/quote] Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. [e digicons]|-)[/e]

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Impressive, this is your best Demigod idea yet and the story was well written and kept me intrigued until the end. It seems like you’ve put more thought into your abilities, which is good. I like how you called his followers the ‘Enchained’, very nice. Was thinking about making a chain Demigod, you beat me to the punch. [e digicons]|-)[/e] <font face="Times

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Hmm, well kind hard to comment on it since the abilities are (if changed to General) and (if kept Assassin), you’ve got to pick what this guy should be. Separate the Oath-Breaker sounds cool though, been thinking of how to implement a character which can essentially ‘multiply’, As it stand his moves still seem more Assassin oriented. Always struggled with abilities, y

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Very nice idea. The only conflict I can find is that there are two of them and only ‘one’ will ascend that wins the tournament… but then I got thinking. A man is a body, soul and spirit. Three parts make up a person and there are three that make up your Demigod, the Juggernaut being the body and Ao and Ona being the soul and spirit. So it could really be ‘one&r

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Well it’s interesting that you went with a character from your previous story, however the fallen angel just seems to be rambling on the whole time and doesn’t really know what’s going on. If I were to have read his dialog without the knowledge of him being an angel I’d have thought he was just some confused guy that wandered into a temple. Also he doesn’t

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[quote]I still enjoy reading your stories, do not have anything to say about abilities since I am not good at coming up with them myself, but yours seem pretty decent.[/quote] Thanks, I enjoy reading yours as well. These Demigod ideas have kind of been free writing exercises… I have actually been writing sci-fi for many years, so working in the fantasy genre has bee

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Heh, not too many people digging the Maw. [quote]So his "power" from enemy minions solely comes from his abilities to restore health with "Consumption," and later on mana. It also comes from a modest ar

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[quote]And perhaps The Maw (video games) ? [/quote] Hah, forgot about that one. I think the Ogre god in Warhammer is called ‘The Great Maw’ if I’m not mistaken. <span st

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You can’t ‘claim’ Deathknights, WoW was not the first to do this and they’re in other games. Ever heard of Warlords Battlecry?

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Heh, well I recall a DotA hero being called Phantom Lancer, he was fun to play. Your guy might be a bit more intriguing with a story; he just seems like a normal knight on a horse… with a lance. Doesn’t exactly fit the Demigod theme as he seems more like a minion than a Demigod. Not that your abilities are bad or anything (except for battle hymn, not sure that fits knights

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I like the story, though a tad bit long. He’s kind of like a righteous zombie soldier, interesting concept. The Sentinel has enough diversity to separate from Oak and Rook’s stories. I have to agree with TheWatcher though about the abilities; they’re not powerful enough for an Assassin based character. <spa

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[quote]Interesting story, and nice de-buff abilities.[/quote] Thanks. Yeah a bit shorter story than what I usually write and no dialog bits, but I think it turned out alright. [quote]Good to see some original thinking much better than itz mah rogue it does gankz lulz.[/quote] <span style="font-size: small; f

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[quote]I think it souds pretty cool, a lot more unique than the majority of new demigods posted. Psi prism doesnt sound all that great to me though.[/quote] Thanks. :D [quote]Well he still has a third eye on his forehead.[/quote] He also has an eye in the center of each hand. ;) <p class="Ms

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[quote]LOOKS LIKE SOMEONE READ YUYU HAKUSHO AROUND HERE[/quote] LOOKS LIKE SOMEONE’S CAPS LOCK IS STUCK AROUND HERE I g

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